Friday 7 March 2014

Cops and Cannibalism (A Retelling of Little Red Riding Hood)

I love writing, but lately I've become a bit stuck on what to write, I've had a lack of inspiration, if you like. With a bit of internet hunting I came across this 30 Day Writing Challenge and thought I'd give it a crack. I like the majority of prompts, but new ideas are always welcome so feel free to suggest anything, a title to inspire, a first line, a last line or a subject. The first prompt was 're-write a classic fairy tale', an idea I've been toying with for a while. So here you have it, my own interpretation of Little Red Riding Hood, with a word of warning, this is not for the squeamish or faint hearted. Enjoy!


Cops and Cannibalism

(A Retelling of Little Red Riding Hood)


“I have eyes on Wolf. I repeat, I have eyes on Wolf,” DCI Huntsman said into his radio. He kept his voice low and his gaze steady from his position behind the large oak tree in the garden of Scarlet Cotes’ Grandmother’s house.
Wolf was standing at the oven in the kitchen, there was something frying in a pan. Why is he cooking? Kidnappers don’t cook. But then, Wolf wasn’t like any other kidnapper he’d come across.
A voice crackled through the small speaker. “We’re in position, when you’re ready sir.”
“Hold it,” barked Huntsman.
This Wolf had his curiosity. For a moment longer, he just wanted to watch him. Plus, he couldn’t see Scarlet or her Grandmother. He steadily moved his binoculars to the right to the further window which revealed the living room. As expected it was full of kitsch knick knacks, garish patterns and old fashioned wallpaper, but neither girl nor Grandmother.
He trained his gaze on the upper window and felt relief sweep through him as he spotted ten year old Scarlet in her red hoodie. Tears streamed down her face, raw from crying, but she appeared strong, healthy.
“Eyes on Scarlet,” Huntsman said.
The first time Huntsman had laid eyes on Scarlet Cotes was barely forty eight hours ago. Her parents had been sitting in his office, gripping her photo so tightly. It was as if they feared she would disappear forever if they let go.
“She didn’t come home and she’s not at my mother’s!” cried Mrs Cotes. “That’s where she’s supposed to be!”
Huntsman had done his best to calm the mother down, but in this situation the words ‘calm’ and ‘mother’ are unachievable. Reluctantly she had passed over the photograph. She was a pretty girl, with dark blonde hair and wide brown eyes.
“I’ll do everything in my power to get her back to you,” he’d said.
And now he stood outside the Grandmother’s house, the kidnapper calmly cooking in the kitchen. No Grandmother in sight.
A familiar voice crept over the radio. “I’m at the back door.”
He should have known. DS Prince, always the maverick.
“Wait,” ordered Huntsman. “This guy is dangerous. We have to proceed with caution.”
From where he stood, he didn’t appear dangerous. Wolf was currently seasoning whatever was in the pan.
“I’m going in,” said Prince.
Huntsman swore under his breath, made sure Wolf was focused on his culinary abilities and then made a dash for the front door, dishing out orders to wait, to leave him and Prince alone with the suspect and the girl.
He let himself in using the key Scarlet’s mother had given him and crept into the hallway. The girl’s school bag had been upturned alongside a bag of shopping she had obviously picked up for her elderly relative. The smell of meat filled his nostrils. The smell of meat and decay.
There was a faint buzzing sound too, like a refrigerator in a quiet kitchen, but this sound was coming from the living room. He peered inside, and amongst all the fake roses and the ‘antique’ furniture was the body of the Grandmother. Insects swarmed over her body. He fought back the bile rising in his throat.
Through the beetles and the bugs he could make out great wounds in her body. She had clearly been slashed and cut up, the flesh ripped from her bones.
The stairs, the gateway to young Scarlet Cotes, were in front of him, but his main priority was arresting Alex Wolf, so he made his way towards the kitchen. He could step inside the room without being seen by Wolf, but being observed by Prince through the window of the back door.
The kitchen was a large room, the old fashioned arga taking up pride of place in the middle of the room. Clunky and mismatched cabinets and sideboards lined the room in that charming way that made the house seem warm and inviting. It would have been warm and inviting, if it wasn’t for that smell.
Huntsman crept in and would have gone unnoticed if it wasn’t for his radio. It bleeped. A small almost insignificant sound but in the silent kitchen it echoed at the volume of a jet engine.
Wolf whirled towards him, a gleaming knife in his hand, already covered in the blood of the dead Grandmother. The detective was momentarily distracted by the man’s eyes. They were large, deep, like black holes. With one glance he could tell there was no soul behind those enormous eyes. Wolf’s ears were also larger than average and with a lip quivering growl he revealed a substantial overbite.
He threw himself at Huntsman, who fell easily, his feet slipping on the blood splattered tiles. Wolf’s knife pressed tightly against his throat while his arms pushed and thrashed. But the man was strong, inconceivably so. In the struggle Huntsman’s hand curled around a handle. With a sneak to his right and a surging rise of hope he saw a pile of logs and the axe blade at the end of the smooth wood. He brought it down with a roar onto Wolf’s back and the large man collapsed on top of him.
“Chief!” cried Prince, rushing through the door, missing the moment.
“I thought you were ‘going in’,” grumbled Huntsman, as he and Prince heaved the dead weight off of the inspector.
Before Prince could answer a little voice in the doorway drew their attention. “Is he dead?”        
“Yes sweetheart,” said Huntsman, his outward brusqueness softening. “He won’t hurt you anymore.”

Epilogue

 “The victim is a thirty eight year old male by the name of Alexander James Wolf,” read the pathologist, from her file. “Outward injuries include a sharp force trauma to the back…” She frowned at the intrusion in her laboratory before adding, “DCI Huntsman, always a pleasure.”
The police officer smiled at the sarcasm in her voice.
“Well, when you’re always so welcoming,” he said, keeping himself a good two feet from the body lying on the table. “All I want to know is what he was cooking. I gather he’d already eaten some of it.”
She flipped through the pages. “Stomach contents include several pieces of human flesh. Awaiting DNA results but preliminary tests point towards Scarlet Cotes’ Grandmother, Muriel Adams.” She gave Huntsman a smile. “You don’t have to be a police officer to work that one out. Goodbye DCI Huntsman.”



   

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